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Spelling IS important!
5 W's
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Michael Phelps and Snoop Dogg have something in common... WOW!!
5 W's
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Parking tickets!!
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monique joseph block 3
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BLOCK 3
Spelling is important
Who-Angela Nickerson
What-She can't spell well
When- Feb. 3, 2009
Where-Sacramento, Calif
Why-Over the past decade, her beloved mother tongue has been mashed, mangled and mistreated by everyone from a sitting president to a squadron of texting preteens.
South Carolina sheriff says he may seek charges against Michael Phelps
Who- Micheal Phelps smokin marijuana
What- Sheriff Leon Lott wants to charge micheal for smoking.
When-Tuesday, February 3, 2009
Where-South Carolina
Why- Because Micheal Phelps was smokin marijuana but nobody else wants to press charges. He has apologized
Parking Tickets
Who- Some lady
What- She received $19,000 in N.O. parking tickets
When-Monday, February 2, 2009
Where- New Orleans
Why- The car was there for days or something.
Gabby Galvan
Block 3
who:michael phelps
What:marijuana misdemeanor
When:feb. 3,2009
Where:COLUMBIA, S.C
Why:because he smoked marijuana
Who:Mary Kieff
what:Woman receives $19,000 in n.o. parking tickets.
when:febuary 2,2009
where:NEW ORLEANS
why:she didnt pay the 226 parking tickets
Roderick l
Block 3
Spelling
Who: Angela Nickerson \
What: won't eat any where with mispelled signs
Where: Sacramento, Calif.
When: didnt say
Why: she's a spelling, grammar and punctuation snob
I think this women has a problem.
Micheal Phelps
Who: Micheal Phelps
What: may be charged with smoking marijuana
Where: South Carolina
When: it didnt say
Why: it was at a party
I think Micheal is stupid. He just became a hero in kids eyes and now he just crushed their dreams.
Parking tickets
Who: Mary Kieff
What: she owes $19,620 dollars
Where: New Orleans
When: Feb. 2
Why: she has been parking illegally
I think this lady is telling the truth. I mean, I how can you tell somebody if they parked somewhere, when they havent been their for years.
Todd Akselrod
Block 3
who:Angela Nickerson
what:spelling teacher
when: Feb. 3, 2009
where:Sacramento, Calif
why:she likes correct grammer.obsessed lady.
who:michael phelps
What:marijuana misdemeanor
When:feb. 3,2009
Where:COLUMBIA, S.C
Why:because he smoked marijuana
Who:Mary Kieff
what:Woman receives $19,000 in n.o. parking tickets.
when:febuary 2,2009
where:NEW ORLEANS
why:she didnt pay the 226 parking tickets
Roderick l
Block 3
Who: Angela Nickerson
What:She says “I confess, I’m a spelling, grammar and punctuation snob,”.
When: this was punblished:7:56 a.m. ET, Tues., Feb. 3, 2009
Where: Sacramento, Calif.
Why/How: Life isn’t easy for language lovers such as Nickerson. Over the past decade, her beloved mother tongue has been mashed, mangled and mistreated by everyone from a sitting president to a squadron of texting preteens. Misspelled menus have become the stuff of bad dreams. (Try our Sweat and Sour Chicken!) Punctuation is not only hit-and-miss, it’s potentially hazardous. (Employees must “wash hands.”)
Alexia P.
block 3.
Spelling IS important
WHO?: Angela Nickerson, Pauline Wallin, Christopher Kenton
WHAT?: The article is about how todays grammar has been greatly changed, due to text messaging, common spelling errors and punctuation.
WHERE?: Sacramento,California
WHY?: People have been misspelling words in almost every thing they write. They want people to finally take notice of these misspellings and try harder not to make them.
WHEN?: Present time
Michael Phelps and Snoop Dogg have something in common... WOW!!
WHO?: Michael Phelps
WHAT?: Michael Phelps may be charged for smoking marijuana.
WHERE?: Columbia, South Carolina
WHY?: Phelps was photographed smoking a marijuana pipe.
WHEN?: November at a party
Parking Tickets
WHO?: Mary Kieff
WHAT?: Kieff has received 226 parking tickets that equal up to $19,000.00!
WHERE?: New Orleans, Louisiana
WHY?: Recived parking tickets for: no stopping any time, no parking in a freight zone, no license plate. Kieff says that the tickets are not legitimate because neither her or her car have been in the area where the tickets have been given out.
WHEN?: Feb. 2, 2009
Tridecia Henry
Block 3
Desmond Brown
Block 3
Mr. Conde i went and finish getting the things for silver knight.
Fastidious spelling snobs pushed over the edge
Who-Angela Nickerson and Pauline Wallin
What- Describing how punctuation effects peoples lives
When- In our Present time
Where-Sacramento, Calif, Camp Hill, Pa,NY
Why- They want people to see the pyscological problem with misspelling words. They also address punctuation.
This articles shows me that spelling and punctuation does influence a lot of people.
Micheal Phelps
Who- Micheal Phelps smoking marijuana
What- There are photos of him smoking marijuana
When –In november at a party
Where- Columbia, South Carolina
Why-He is an olymic medalist who was caught smoking on a picture. Now he is being charged with a mistomenor.
This was a shocking article.I would have never guess he would smoke weed after winningall those medals.
Parking Tickets
Who-Mary Kieff
What- She is being charged to pay parking tickets that she did not do.
When- Monday Febuary 2nd
Where- New Orleans
Why- She was never there for those tickets. She does not live near where the tickets were given.
Alliea Bacchus
Block 3
Michael Phelps &+ Snoop Dogg
Who:Michael phelps
What:Marijuana Misdemeanor
When:Feb.3,2009
Where:COLUMBIA, S.C
Why/How:He smoked marijuana.
Parking Tickects
Who:Mary Kieff
What:She received $19,000 in n.o. parking tickets.
When:Feb.2,2009
Where:New Orleans
Why/How:She didnt pay the parking tickects.
Alexia P
Block 3.
Who:angela w.
When:Feb,3,2009
Where:Sacramento,Cl
Why:Overthe past ten years angela has been badly influnced by misspelled words.
Who:Michael Phelps
What:Richland County Sheriff Leon Lott says he want to charge phelps with the possesion of weed.
When:n/a
Where:COLUMBIA, S.C
Who:Mary Kieff
What:owes 190,000 in unpaid parking tickets.
When:feb,2,2009
Where:New orleans,la
lynwood walker
block:3
carly chery
block 3
spelling is important
who:Angela Nickerson
what:she cannot spell
when:2/3/09
where:Sacramento Calif
why:her beloved mother tongue have been mashed,mangled and misteated by everyone
Michael Phelps and snoop dog have something in common
who;michael phelps
what:smokin marijuana
when:2/3/09
where:november party in columbia
why:Michael phelps has apologigizes.
and they will charge him with a crime
Parking tickets
who:Mary Kieff
what:she must go in jail
when:2/3/09
where: new orleans
why:she was judging by the number of parking tickets in the city of new orleans
MP&SD
who-Michael Phelps
what-was photographed smoking a marijuana pipe at a November party in Columbia
when-NOVERMBER 2008
where-Columbia south carliona
why-because probably to feel better
SPELLING IS IMPORTANT
who-Angela Nickerson
what-wont go to krispy kreme
when-doesnt matter
where-Sacramento, Calif
why-because it is not spell correctly and she is a
grammar and punctuation snob
PARKING TICKETS
who-Mary Kieff
what-226 tickets for a total of $19,620, she hasnt payed so now she is in trouble
when-sometime ago
where-NEW ORLEANS
why-cause she has not payed her bills yet
Alvin Walker blk3
Spelling Is Important
Who:Angela Nickerson
What:she will not eat anywhere things are mispelled
Where:Sacremento, California
When:Feb 3, 2009
Why:she is obsessed with grammer and spelling and everything has to be perfect.
Michael Phepls
Who:michael phelps
What:sheriff lott wants to charge him
Where:south carolina
When:november at a party
Why:because he was smoking marijuana
Parking Tickets
Who:a woman
What:recieved $19,000 in parking tickets
Where:new orleans
When:feb 2, 2009
Why:her car was parked there for to long
sadei ceran
block 4
1.
who: Angela Nickerson
what: avoids Krispy Kreme because of the the misspelling K's
where: from Sacramento, Calif.
when: her whole life - 35 yrs old
why: because she is a spelling, grammar and punctuation snob
2.
who: Michael Phelps
what: he will be charged with a crime
where: Richland County
when: recently
why: the Olympics hero smoked marijuana
3.
who: Mary Kieff
what: receives $19,000 in N.O. parking tickets
where: New Orleans
when: over the past two years
why: Mary says the tickets can't be legitimate, because neither she nor her car were in New Orleans on the days and times they were written.
Megan O'Connor
block 4 :)
Spelling IS important
who:Angela Nickerson
what:will not eat anywhere that mispells words
when:2/3/09
where:Sacramento, Calif
Michael Phelps and Snoop Dogg have something in common... WOW!!
who:Michael Phelps
what:might be charged for smoking marijuana
when:2/3/09
where:COLUMBIA, S.C
why:Michael Phelps was caught smoking marijuana.
Parking Tickets!!!
who:Mary kieff
what:owes $19,620
when:2/2/09
where:new orleans
why:did notpay 226 parking tickets
Aisha Henry
Block 3
Spelling IS important!
who: a lady named -Angela Nickerson
what: she was mad crazy about how people spell and grammer
where: Sacramento, Calif.
when: febuary 3 09
why: she was obseced with how people spell ans pronounce there grammer
___________________________________
Michael Phelps and Snoop Dogg have something in common... WOW!!
who:Michael Phelps
what: he got cought with weed
where:Richland County,COLUMBIA, S.C.
when: monday
why: he got cought with weed at a party
___________________________________
Parking tickets!!
who: Mary Kieff
what: she has 226 tickets that are a total of $19,620
where: NEW ORLEANS
when: monday
why: she didnt pay the tickets because she think that the tickets were not accurate beasue she say the car and the ticket information dont match
justin reid
bl 4
02/03/09
*spelling is important
WHO:Angela Nickerson
WHAT:wont go to Krispy Kreme
WHEN:feb. 3, 2009
WHERE:Sacramento, Calif.
WHY:she is a proper speller and she makes sure that her spelling is always correct.
*Michael phelps and snoop dogg have somethin in common
WHO:Michael phelps
WHAT:Olympics hero smoked marijuana
WHEN:Feb.3,2009
WHERE:Richland County
WHY:Richland County Sheriff Leon Lott says he will charge Michael Phelps with a crime if he determines the Olympics hero smoked marijuana.
*parking tickets
WHO:Mary Kieff
WHAT:Mary Kieff has 226 tickets for a total of $19,620,that she didnt pay but for some reason she thought she wasnt going to jail.
WHEN:feb. 2,2009
WHERE:New Orleans
WHY:she might be going to jail because she didnt pay her parking tickets
De'Onna rush block4
who:Michael Phelps
what:Richland County Sheriff Leon Lott says he will charge Michael Phelps with a crime if he determines the Olympics hero smoked marijuana in Richland County.
where:COLUMBIA, S.C.
when:November
why: doesnt know.
who:Angela Nickerson
what:Is annoyed by mispelled words
where:Sacramento, Calif
when:Feb. 3, 2009
why:she just doesnt appreciate the way people spell incorrectly.
who:Mary Kieff
what:Woman receives $19,000 in N.O. parking tickets
where:NEW ORLEANS
when:February 2, 2009
why:she hasn't paid her tickets.
Who:Michael Phelps
What:might be getting charged
Where:south carolina
When:at a party in november
Why:got caught smoking weed
Who:angela nickerson
What:doesnt like mispelled words
Where:california
When:2/3/09
WHy:she just has a problem with mispelled words and will not anywhere things are mispelled at for example krispy kreme.
Who:Mary Kieff
WHat:she got $19,000 in N.O. parking tickets
Where:new orleans
When:2/2/09
Why:she didnt pay her parking tickets.
mark roach
4th block
Spelling is important
who-Angela Nickerson
when-Tues., Feb. 3, 2009
where-Sacramento, California
what-she can't spell very well.
why-because her grammar and punctuation snob.
I think that the lady really needs help because she feels bad that she cannot spell.
South Carolina sheriff says he may seek charges against Michael Phelps
who-Michael Phelps
when-Tuesday, February 3, 2009
where-South Carolina
what-the sherrif is charging him for smoking.
why-because he was smoking marijuana.
I think that he should get charge if he was smoking marijuana.
parking tickets
who-Mary Kieff
where-NEW ORLEANS
when-Monday, February 2, 2009
what-she got 226 tickets that cost about$19,000.00
why-she was not driving good she did many things wrong and she says the she was never in new orleans.
I think that that is too much money i think that she should get like a bill so she can pay it little by little.
Catherine Sarmiento
block4
who: Angela Nickerson
what: Won't eat at Kripsy Kreme
When: Feb. 3, 2009
Where:Sacramento, Calif
Why:“I confess, I’m a spelling, grammar and punctuation snob,”
who: Michael Phelps
what: getting charged
When:Feb 3
Where:Richland County.
Why:for smoking marijuana
who: Mary Kieff
what:recieves $19,000
When: Monday, February 2, 2009
Where:new orleans
Why:parking tickets
Bao Nguyen
Block 4
Fastidious spelling snobs pushed over the edge
Who: the 35-year-old travel writer from Sacramento, Calif.
What:they are saying that people have alot of problems with misspelling words
When:Todays time group
Where:all over the world
Why:to show that spelling need s to be paid attion to more offen
South Carolina sheriff says he may seek charges against Michael Phelps
Who: Michael Phelps
What: somked pot at a party
When: November
Where: Columbia
Why: he was at a party
Woman receives $19,000 in N.O. parking tickets
Who: Mary Kieff
What: receives $19,000 in N.O. parking tickets
When: about a month
Where: West Bank residents
Why:she has to many tickits
brian perdomo blk 4
who:Angela Nickerson
what: she wont go to krispy kreme because of their bad grammar
when:today
where: sacramento, california
why: the english tounge has been butchered.
its good that shes so strict w/it but not going to certain places becuase of it is ridiculous.
________________________
who:Richland County Sheriff Leon Lott
what: he may try to chagre michael phelps for smoking weed
when: today
where: south carolina
why:he apparentl smoked in richland county.
its not needed to be a big story just keep it on the DL.
____________________________
who: mary kieff
what: she has recieved $19,620 in parking tickets
when: february 2, 2009
where: new orleans
why:not stated.
she should pay and have her license revoked
kaitlyn m.
block 4
who:Angela Nickerson
what:When it comes to spelling, grammar and punctuation she's a snob
where:Sacramento, Calif
when:Feb. 3, 2009
why: Its a pet peeve of hers
________________________________
who:Michael Phelps
what:Richland County Sheriff Leon Lott says he will charge Michael Phelps with a crime if he determines the Olympics hero smoked marijuana in Richland County.
where:COLUMBIA, S.C.
when:November
why: doesnt know.
________________________________
who:Mary Kieff
what:gets $19,000 for a parking tickets
where:NEW ORLEANS
when:February 2, 2009
why:she didnt paid her tickets.
Xavier Dent
Block 4
who:Angela Nickerson
what:Doesnt like the way they spell kripsy kreme
where:sacramento, Ca
when:feb 3rd 2009
why:Shes a perfection when it comes to grammer and hates it when people midspell things
who:michael phelps
what:Got caught smoking marijuana and they took a picture of it and it disappointed fans.
where:south carolina
when:feb 3rd 2009
why:he is getting charged for smoking marijuana.
who:Mary Kieff
what:she owes $19,620
where:NEW ORLEANS
when:Monday, February 2, 2009
why:she never payed them.
Spellings Important
Who: Angela Nickerson
What: Doesn't like the way they spell Kripsy Kreme
When: 2/3/09
Where: Sacramento,Calif.
Why: She wants prefection when it comes to spelling
Michael Phelps
Who: Michael Phelps
What: found with weed on him
When: 3/3/09
Where: South Carolina
Why: He wanted to get high
Parking Tickets
Who: Mary Kieff
What: She owes $19,620
Where: NEW ORLEANS
When: 2/2/09
Why: She never paid them.
Michael Weiner
3rd Block
SPELLING IS IMPORTANT;;
Wh0; Angela Nickerson
What; She spells things wrong &Is bad at grammar.
Where; Sacramento, California
When; Always,,Her whole lifee.
Why; Because she confessed, Shes a spelling &Grammar &Punctuation slob.
MICHAEL PHELPS;;
Wh0; Michael Phelps
What; Charged w/ a crime for smoking Marijuana.
Where; South Carolina.
When; Recently
Why; The world known Olympics hero got caught smoking .
PARKING TICKETS;;
Wh0; Mary Kieff
What; receives $19,000 in N.O. parking tickets
Where; New Orleans
When; February 2nd, 2009
Why; She says their false &Fake because she hasnt been to New Orleans when the tickets were written .
RACHEL LEIGHTON ;
BLOCK 3
Who: Punctuation and grammar snobs
What: They are annoyed with how somethings are spelled or have the wrong puntuation
When: Doesn't say
Where: Different locations
Why: There is no particular reason why, but I guess it really bothers them
I think the whole thing is dumb, like talk about another thing people keep making a big deal about, for no reason.
Who: Michael Phelps && Sheriff Leon Lott
What: He will charge Michael Phelps with a crime if he determines the Olympics hero smoked marijuana
Where: COLUMBIA, S.C
When: Doesn't really say but I think Monday
Why: I think it's because the Sheriff is a wee bit dramatic. Everyone but him said that they would just leave it alone.
Wow, another celebrity smoking weed, big deal! Yeah yeah he may be an athlete and did good in the Olympics, but it's the same thing, every single time. Not that serious, ohhh and the sheriff is extreamly dramatic.
Who: Mary Kieff
What: She recieved $19,620 worth of parking tickets.
When: Monday
Where: NEW ORLEANS
Why: She doesn't really know because she says the tickets can't be legitimate, because neither she nor her car were in New Orleans on the days and times they were written
I don't have much to say because the whole thing sounds way too suspicious.
Valerie V block 4
working on pages
monique j block 3
Who, Angela Nickerson
What, She spells things wrong &Is bad at grammar.
Where, Sacramento, California
When Always,,Her whole lifee.
Why, Because she confessed, Shes a spelling &Grammar &Punctuation slob.
MICHAEL PHELPS
Wh0, Michael Phelps
What Charged w/ a crime for smoking Marijuana.
Where, South Carolina.
When, Recently
Why, The world known Olympics hero got caught smoking .
PARKING TICKETS;;
Who, Mary Kieff
What, receives $19,000 in N.O. parking tickets
Where, New Orleans
When, February 2nd, 2009
Why, She says their false &Fake because she hasnt been to New Orleans when the tickets were written .
LAUREN GODWIN BLK. 3
I worked on the rough draft body copy for flag-football.
Kristen Walden
Block 3
SPELLING IS IMPORTANT
who-Angela Nickerson
what-wont go to krispy kreme
when-doesnt matter
where-Sacramento, Calif
why-because she is a spell freak
Reaction-I think that she has problems
Michael Phelps
who-Michael Phelps
what-was photographed smoking a marijuana pipe at a November party in Columbia
when-NOVERMBER 2008
where-Columbia, South Carliona
why-maybe he had to much stress on him
Reaction-He was just doing something to make him feel better
PARKING TICKETS
who-Mary Kieff
what-226 tickets for a total of $19,620, she hasnt payed so now she is in trouble
when-sometime ago
where-NEW ORLEANS
why-cause she has not payed her bills yet
Reaction-that whats she gets because everyone else is paying their bills and she thinks she gets a free be.
Cathy Belony blk3
working on ads page
m.julme
blk 4
"SPELLING IS IMPORTANT"
WHO;ANGELA NICKERSON
WHAT;SHE COULDNT SPELL
WHEN;FEBRUARY 3RD,2009
WHERE;SACRAMENTO CALI,
WHY;HER BELOVED MOTHERS TONGUE HAS BEEN MASHED, MANGLED AND MISTREATED BY EVERYONE.
Michael Phelps and Snoop Dogg have something in common... WOW!!
WHO;MICHAEL PHELPS
WHAT;MAY BE CHARGED FOR SMOKING MARIJUANA.
WHEN;N/A
WHERE;COLUMBIA S.C
WHY;HE JUST DESTROYED HIS IMAGE TO KIDS HE SHOULD BE ASHAMED!
Parking tickets!!
WHO;MARY KEIFF
WHAT; SHE OWES $19,620
WHEN;FEBRUARY 2ND,2009
WHERE;NEW ORLEANS
WHY;SHE HAD BEEN PARKING THERE ILLEGALLY.
WHO?Michelle natson
WHAT?gets hit by a drunk driver
WHEN?TUESDAY
Where?Ft.Lauderdale
WHY?jay walkin
cherelle barnes
blk 4
Who:Michael Phelps
What:Richland County Sheriff Leon Lott says he will charge Michael Phelps with a crime if he determines the Olympics hero smoked marijuana in Richland County.
Where:COLUMBIA, S.C.
When:November
Why: doesnt know.
Who: Angela Nickerson
What: She spells things wrong &Is bad at grammar.
Where: Sacramento, California
When: Always,,Her whole lifee.
Why: Because she confessed, Shes a spelling &Grammar &Punctuation slob.
Who: Mary Kieff
What: She owes $19,620
Where: NEW ORLEANS
When: 2/2/09
Why: She never paid them.
Shawn Z
3rd Block
who:Angela Nickerson
what:spelling teacher
when: Feb. 3, 2009
where:Sacramento, Calif
why:she likes correct grammer.obsessed lady.
who:michael phelps
What:marijuana misdemeanor
When:feb. 3,2009
Where:COLUMBIA, S.C
Why:because he smoked marijuana
Who:Mary Kieff
what:Woman receives $19,000 in n.o. parking tickets.
when:febuary 2,2009
where:NEW ORLEANS
why:she didnt pay the 226 parking tickets
trevis smith
South Carolina sheriff says he may seek charges against Michael Phelps
who: michael phelps
what: marijuana charge
when: feb. 3 2008
where:COLUMBIA, S.C.
why:Phelps, who set a record with eight gold medals in the 2008 Summer Olympics, was photographed smoking a marijuana pipe at a November party in Columbia
christina p
block 3
WHO:Angela Nickerson
WHAT: She won't patronize businesses with incorrect spelling
WHEN: Feb.3,2009
WHERE:Sacremento Calif.
WHY: She is a spelling, grammar and punctuation snob.
I think that women is freaking mad...english is an illusion=]
WHO:Michael Phelps
WHAT:He Was smoking GANJAAAA
WHERE:At a party.
WHEN:November
WHY:He loves Marijuana....
Legalize it!!
WHO:Mary Kieff
WHAT:19,000 thousand dollars in parking tickets.
WHERE:New orleans
WHEN:FEb.2,2009
WHY:they charged her with false tickets that are obviously not hers.
The police dont know what there doing.
workin with bri on year book
nishelle johnson
blk-4
who:Angela Nickerson
what:spelling teacher
when: Feb. 3, 2009
where:Sacramento, Calif
why:she likes correct grammer.obsessed lady.
who:michael phelps
What:marijuana misdemeanor
When:feb. 3,2009
Where:COLUMBIA, S.C
Why:because he smoked marijuana
Who:Mary Kieff
what:Woman receives $19,000 in n.o. parking tickets.
when:febuary 2,2009
where:NEW ORLEANS
why:she didnt pay the 226 parking tickets
spelling IS important.
who? Angela Nickerson.
what? she won't attend businesses that have misspelling signs. ex, Krispy Kreme.
where? Sacramento, California.
when? all of time she doesnt go to them.
why? she's a "punctuation snob".
opinion: this lady is stupid. restuarants do this to attract people and give their place a little twist. she should just give up because soon enough everyone will have "slang" names.
Michael Phelps and Snoop Dogg have something in common.
who? Michael Phelps.
what? he may be charged for smoking marijuana.
where? a party in Columbia.
when? in November.
why? he was photographed smoking a marijuanna pipe.
opinion: i bet that just about eery famous person has or does smoke marijuanna. michael phelps just happened to be the unlucky one. he made a mistake; nobodys perfect.
parking tickets.
who? Mary Kieff
what? has been charged with 226 parking tickets for a total of $19,620.
where? in New Orleans.
when? February 2, 2009.
why? supposedly for many different illegal things.
opinion: it doesnt really make any sense. why would some officer write random tickets for something that never even happened...? i think that an officer is doing this for pay back of some type because this cant be true.
g.torre
block 04
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